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I salute your relentless quippage. The story calls to mind some kind of bizarre episode of Futurama. It never heads off fully in the dark direction it appears to be set on when Satan turns up - it stays cute, and neat, and cool. Which is good.

It's all so unashamedly cheesy that I have to love it.

eggo

Thank you ~~,

If you hit 'em with a joke and are not sure it's going to work, throw another one in just to make sure.

Keridwen

Haha!! I loved this story!!

I don't know why they all quibble about the grammatical errors...its not really helping you...its the storyline you submit it to be reviewed, right? I didn't even notice any errors. Haha I had to read that "Paris in the in the Spring" twice before I spotted the error. So that's probably just me. Hehe.

And I loved the storyline. Kept me reading till the end!! It has that 'real' touch - I mean its fantasy come sci-fi and you managed to make it seem real. Wooh!!

Haha that car IS ugly!

My fave joke/quote/whatever is Hahaha funny funny. Good ole sarcastic character, again. You can never lose with sarcasm!!!

More sarcastic characters! lol