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Old 06-26-2005, 06:20 PM   #1
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Old 06-26-2005, 09:26 PM   #2
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hehehe that was really funny... the end cracked me up. good use of humor throughout the whole story.

Quote: "Johnny was writing an essay for his composition class just before his life was changed forever"

this is the only sentence in the story that I don't really like. I would omit that second "was".
I think "Johnny was writing an essay for his comp class just before his life changed forever" sounds a little better.

great job though!!
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Old 06-27-2005, 09:09 AM   #3
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Hey,

Nicely written, nice light sarcasm and humor. No grammaticals (except the one).

God, I had actually flagged the apostrophe in question too. I guess I am the grammar-nazi to which the thread refers.

A cute read. Made me smile. Thx.
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Funny wee story, short and sweet.
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