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Rosalina
It was very good. You have a good knack for keeping people exactly where you want them in your writing. You don't let their minds wander into any possible scenarios because you haven't given them any other possible choices that could spoil the surprise. Not many writers can do that, and I commend you for your talent. Pat yourself on the back.
Lots of lovies,
Peppergirl
We're finally allowed to speak our minds, and no one says a word.
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