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Old 08-25-2004, 12:03 AM   #1
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Title: GLASS FACE

I remember the site I first saw you. The first image of your precious face and turquoise eyes. I never spoke to you, just typed. But you never responded and I constantly wondered why. Could you not see that the rest of the world you were open to did not love you. Can you not see that we are so close but still too far away from each other. I spent endless nights and restless dreams, wondering how I could woe you. You were too good for the others and you never knew it. Behind the beauty and charm you were hurt like me. The same way I once felt, you feel every second in the endless pit of sorrow and sin. How I wish I could remove you from the set and keep you for myself; unveil the shadowing mask that prevails your dimples.

But why didn’t you respond, you and I were perfect. We lived a happy life full of passion and romance, because you know, I am the romantic kind of guy. We grow old with two children and we are happy. The life we once lived is behind us, and for all eternity will I forever hold your hand.

If I cannot have you I hope no one can.

But that’s not such a horrible thing to hope for. After all, they meant nothing to you, or so you will find that they are nothing.

You’ll see the day, the day when you finally give me the time, that I will be gone and you will be sorry. You and I will both be sorry.

Oh but do remember those restless evenings we spent together. I wouldn’t have missed it for the world. The few times I saw you, It was though I had been with you my entire life.

I love you sincerely, Guest_60

I’m not telling you to give up the life of sin you lead. I’m telling you that there is something better called love.
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Old 08-29-2004, 02:49 AM   #2
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Re: Title: GLASS FACE

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I spent endless nights and restless dreams, wondering how I could woe you.
You mean woo right? I liked the "sincerely..." line--it felt almost funny between the two spaces, just another guest, and yet, sad.
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