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'I'm not going in there, it's dark'
'So?'
'So.....I just can't be bothered.'
He smiles. 'You're scared, go on admit it.'
'Am not.'
'Are too. I can tell.'
'How?'
'I just can. You know it and I know it.'
They paused, eyes turning once more to the tunnel. Water dripped down from the entrance and their nostrils filled with the dank smell of rotten moss.
'It is kinda scary I guess. Reminds me of that film...'
'Where they all die underground?'
'Yeah, the man with the machete chops them and drinks the blood from the veins in their arms.'
'And, what about that bit where he sucks the guy's eye out.... Yeeawwch!' His eyes widen,'Perhaps we shouldn't go in.'
' Maybe you're right. I'm kinda hungry anyways and mom's cooking pie tonight!'

Plitec

heh, nice. Anything that manages to raise a smile goes down as good in my books

There seem to be a few posts of yours here that are good, but v short. It'd be nice to see a full length piece where you can elaborate more and devlop ideas.

Cheers

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