An untitled story. My best piece of work. - Page 2 - Writers Forum

A-Chan · 12-11-2003, 07:55 PM

LoL, I wish my Logan was like that... oh well, it takes time. *evil laughter*

VenerealJesus · 12-15-2003, 10:11 PM

Well I can see you guys are having a private conversation about iced drinks and what not But i would like to congratualte whoever wrote this story, it is very good, though the strange out of focus style which you wrote in the begining could go and not be missed in my opinion. But i did like the whole interpretation of speech thing the son was doing, nicley done.

DreamWalker · 12-17-2003, 05:49 PM

This truth in which you speak of, the one covered in security...well, I won't let it, or you, smother me. I'd like to, but it couldn't work. Shred it up and take turns. I don't regret a thing. I got this friend, you see, and he makes me feel like I wanted more then I could steal.

VenerealJesus · 12-17-2003, 08:17 PM

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH i like nirvana more than you.

it's not a race god damn it!

lounge act best song ever.

DreamWalker · 12-18-2003, 06:26 PM

Indeed...and one can't help but love Rape Me...