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Short Stories Short Stories, usually between 500 and 2000 words.

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Old 12-06-2003, 12:43 PM   #1
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I liked this

I particularly liked your description of Neil. It was a well formed characterisation. Your prose is interesting. I like the way things are described so straightforwardly. There's not much messing about and it makes the environments and people see more real, which I think is crucial to writing.
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