Thread: My version of Little Red Riding Hood

This post has been removed because the work is unfinished, out of date and not something I wish to keep in the public arena.

this isn't a scipt

nor is much of it comprehensible as anything... whatever it is, it needs a good proofread/edit to correct all the garbled grammar and scrambled syntax...

It certainly is a working script. It's already been used for the toybox puppet theatre and translated in french for the same purpose.

I can appreciate if you don't like it, though I'd like to see more versions on fairytales in this section. Mine can start it off.

Don't like you comparing Granny to me. And why not have eggs in the basket, just for variety? Y'know, new laid eggs?

aaahhhh...well its just the same isnt it?...and the grammar!!!...I dont know what kind of work can be done on it either...why not twist it a bit...did it ever strike you that the wolf might not be evil?...why not try dispelling some notions...just a thought.