FADE IN
INT. DEBORAH'S BEDROOM -AFTERNOON
The sound of Amy Winehouse's "Love is a loosing game" is heard and shown is Deborah Gray, a caucasion woman in her late 20's sitting on her bed. She's letting a Marlboro Light burn away as it rests between her red painted lips. Layed out before her is a white towel with several Machine guns on it- she shines what seems to be her favorite 9mm automatic Pistol. The old fashion phone on her nightstand rings. She answers.
Deborah:
Yes?
Male ( V.O.):
It's time.
Deborah:
Ok.
Deborah hangs up.
FADE IN
EXT. BUSY TRAIN STATION -AFTERNOON
A silver train with a red pin stripe comes to a halt. The sliding doors open and out steps Deborah, dressed in a black trench coat and black sunglasses. She keeps her hands in her pockets as she collectedly walks down. She then swiftly drops a silver flip-phone onto the trains platform and keeps walking.
Mathew Cotton, a seemingly laid back guy in his mid 20's spots the phone and picks it up.
Mathew:
Miss, your phone.
Deborah keeps walking, ignoring Mathew.
Mathew ( confused ):
Ma'm?
Deborah continues walking and Mathew follows but rushy businessmen and women get in the way, stretching the distance between Deborah and Mathew.
EXT. BUSY CITY STREET -AFTERNOON
Mathew stays hot on Deb's trail, and she takes a turn and enters an alley between 2 brick apartment buildings. From across the street, a Police car is parked and the prying eyes of the cop inside it notices Mathew follow Deborah into the alleyway. The cop leaves his car and crosses the road.
Mathew looks around the alley but Deb's nowhere to be seen. With the cell phone at hand, he gets a tap on his shoulder from the cop.
Cop:
What are you doing here?
Mathew:
I was gonna return this lady her phone but she disappeared.
The cop roles his eyes.
Cop:
Lemme' see your ID.
Mathew pulls out his wallet and shuffles through it for his ID, then gives it to the Cop. The cop takes a look at it.
Cop:
C'mon with me.
The cop and Mathew cross the road together, the cop opens his car door- Mathew stands on the other side of the car, with his hands in his pockets, looking down to the ground. He glances up and spots Deb way back in the alley. Mathew leaps across the road himself and goes after her.
Cop:
Hey! Stop!
The cop chases after him but Mathew's got the lead. He reaches the back of the alley- where Deb was seen- but notices it's a dead end. The cop catches up with him- he's got his gun out and aimed at Mathew's back.
Cop:
Put your hands up!
Mathew raises both his hands and the cop smacks the cell phone out of Mathew's hand, then drop kicks him to the ground. FROM MATHEW'S P.O.V the cop gives one last kick to his face.
FADE IN
INT. PRECINCT CELL. NIGHT
Mathew is handcuffed and sitting on a bench seat inside of his cell. His face is all bloody. He looks up and notices Deborah walk in, he wants to shout "hey" but bites his tongue. Deborah is using sign language with a Hispanic lady in her mid 40's. Together they walk up to Mathew's cell.
Hispanic lady ( looking over to Deb's hands ):
???
END.
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That's all I got in the works for now. I have 2 other versions of possible outcomes starting before the part where the cop car is first seen, however I'd like some feedback on this one first.This is a Thriller/Action/Drama btw.



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