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Last edited by Jon M; 08-28-2010 at 10:44 PM.
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English words are like prisms. Empty, nothing inside, and still they make rainbows.Denis Johnson, Already Dead
I'm not familiar with the critique of scripts, but I must say, the dialogue alone has quite a build up. I felt an eerie aspect in the Man's lofty appreciation of "it". I, however, have only one complaint, it ended. Please write more.
"And now, you know... As do I."
~Dark Arts
Glad you enjoyed the dialogue. I was hoping to convey some of THE MAN'S personality in his speech -- eerie, like you said, desperate, and perhaps a little delusional.
More to come.
English words are like prisms. Empty, nothing inside, and still they make rainbows.Denis Johnson, Already Dead
Intriguing work, FS. From a few dialogues, the Man's character is gradually ushered in. The suspense in the whole writing has been laid down so naturally. But I really wonder who this man is?
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Last edited by Jon M; 08-29-2010 at 07:26 AM.
English words are like prisms. Empty, nothing inside, and still they make rainbows.Denis Johnson, Already Dead
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