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    Arrow Quick script formatting question.

    When it's important for the audience to know exactly where and/or when a scene is taking place. In an establishing shot there will be a title on the bottom of the screen like:


    Philadelphia, 1776

    How would that be formatted?


    Thanks in advance!
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    I would say your best bet is

    TITLE OVER:
    Philadelphia, 1776

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    Sounds good

    Thanks,

    I have Trottier's "Screenwriter's Bible" which hasn't left me wanting until now.

    So right under the Slugline with that? Never mind. Got it.




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    I'd say put it when it appears.

    EXT. PHILADELPHIA STREET -- DAY

    A street in colonial Philadelphia. Nice old homes, gas lamps.
    A carriage approaches.

    TITLE OVER: PHILADELPHIA, 1776

    The carriage stops, JOHN PAINE steps out and holds up a hand for his SLUTTY DRESSED COMPANION.





    But maybe like

    EXT. JFK AIRPORT --DAY

    STOCK SHOT: Plane lading at Kennedy Airport

    TITLE OVER: JOHN F. KENNEDY AIRPORT, NEW YORK

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    Quote Originally Posted by lin View Post
    I'd say put it when it appears.

    EXT. PHILADELPHIA STREET -- DAY

    A street in colonial Philadelphia. Nice old homes, gas lamps.
    A carriage approaches.

    TITLE OVER: PHILADELPHIA, 1776

    The carriage stops, JOHN PAINE steps out and holds up a hand for his SLUTTY DRESSED COMPANION.





    But maybe like

    EXT. JFK AIRPORT --DAY

    STOCK SHOT: Plane lading at Kennedy Airport

    TITLE OVER: JOHN F. KENNEDY AIRPORT, NEW YORK
    OK. On the Nicholl page, it's centered on the dialog, below "TITLE OVER:"

    Not sure how to do this in FD. I suppose it's not a big deal.
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    I wouldn't worry about centering it.

    Seems to me it's like any SUB, CARD, etc. A tag aligned left in caps.

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    Quote Originally Posted by lin View Post
    I wouldn't worry about centering it.

    Seems to me it's like any SUB, CARD, etc. A tag aligned left in caps.

    good enuf'.
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