Thread: Logline - Airborne

I suck awesome at loglines!

1 - A crewman's dissapearance onboard a bomber on a critical mission during WWII, dramatically impacts the lives of the crew, despite being court martialled and blocked by military protocol, the disgraced navigator risk his life on a quest to solve the military cover-up.

2 - A crewman's dissapearance onboard a bomber on a critical mission during WWII dramatically impacts the crew's lives and spurs the disgraced navigator to risk his life to fight a court martial and military protocol to solve the military cover-up.

3 - His life dramatically impacted by a crewman's dissapearance onboard a bomber on a critical mission during WWII, the disgraced navigator risks his life to discover the truth behind the military cover-up.

4 - In risking his life to expose a military cover-up, the disgraced navigator uncovers the truth behind a crewman's dissapearance onboard a bomber on a critical mission during WWII that had the crew court martialled.

Which logline do you think is best?
Please improve or advise if you want to.

Originally Posted by stanza-reel

Personally, I think this would be a pretty boring script. Then again what do I know?

Okay, so I will patch you up to just being here for the food.