ShadowZero007

The Concept is really hard to explain I'll post it if anyone wants to see it to gain insight as to whats going on but this is my intro scene

Scene 1: Dreams

Setting: Camera pointed up at a sprinkling gray sky with little sun pushing through

Jack: The universe is perfect. No matter how controversial cruel or vague it may seem. Everything is right where it should be. You don’t get what you deserve, the concept of karma is simply wishful thinking, but don’t curse the world when it pushes you. Its all scripted, predetermined. The show must go on. The universe is in perfect balance. Everything has its counter. However Everything in life breaks down once in a while and so does existence.Its all destined except when this occurs, I'm free, no lines on my script. I write the script of destiny... *sighs* I’m lost

[ Cloudy sky Becomes Deep Blue in an instant small lettering stating 3 months earlier appears]

Jack: Hello

Jim: *cackles* hey there jaaaack

Jack: how do yo-

Jim: I know lots about you Jack, I’m here to guide you

Jack: Guide me?

Jim: *laughs* but of course it’s my role

Jack: Who a-

Jim: My name is Jim, Jack

Jack: Guide me where Jim?

Jim: To your destiny, and heres hoping salvation

Jack: From what

Jim: Your mind isn’t the right stage.

Jack: what do you mean?

Jim: It’s time for you to wake up Jack

[A white feather falls from the sky , sun begins to rise as camera pulls back through a window and to a boy sleeping in bed then continues out of his room through his house and outside going around the town while credits play till they eventually go back to his room, then it comes closer to the boy and a black clawed hand shakes him. Till he awakens soon as his eyes open the hand vanishes]

Jack: hmm *looks gloomily out the window then half smiles* same dream…

[He gets up and walks out of the room the camera stays focused on his bed showing window and a decent portion of room a mysterious figure is perched upon a light pole outside his window movie title appears end scene 1]

(Please bear with me Im learning the preffered format once ive edited it on the script ill change it here)