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Old 10-04-2005, 02:11 AM   #1
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Animal

This is something I wrote awhile back and I've always been drawn back to it to polish. I focus on the ten minute play format, mostly, and this is one of those so it should be a short read, but a harsh topic. Any input welcome.

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Old 10-04-2005, 10:01 AM   #2
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you'll need to post it here, if you want much in the way of feedback, trish... most folks don't like to have to go elsewhere to read a piece...

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Old 10-04-2005, 02:16 PM   #3
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you'll need to post it here, if you want much in the way of feedback, trish... most folks don't like to have to go elsewhere to read a piece...
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Ok...it's like 10 pages though, that's not bad form?
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if it's too long to post in toto, you can always post just the first 2-3 pages to get feedback... and add the link to the whole thing, in case anyone wants to read further... or post the next few pages in another post...
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