Welcome to Writing Forums, one of the fastest growing writing communties on the web.
You are currently viewing our boards as a guest which gives you limited access to view most discussions, articles and photo galleries. By joining our free community you will
be able to talk with other writers, get feedback on your work to improve your writing skills, discuss ideas, share tips & tricks, network and make friends!
Registration is fast, simple and absolutely free so please, join our community today!
If you have any problems with the registration process or your account login, please contact support.
| Scripts & Plays Scripts, Plays, Movies etc. |
09-24-2004, 08:46 PM
|
#1
|
|
Member
Join Date: Sep 2004
Posts: 8
|
A Play: Part One
deleted post.
|
|
|
|
10-16-2004, 10:04 AM
|
#2
|
|
Member
Join Date: Sep 2004
Posts: 8
|
deleted post.
|
|
|
|
|
10-16-2004, 12:36 PM
|
#3
|
|
Ink Slinger
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: sort of upstate NY
Posts: 2,834
|
I liked your play, but I really do not now enough about writing them to give you any real criticism. Just remember that even if you do not get any more critiques at least one person here enjoyed it.
Some members do not like to click on links. You may get more replies if you post Part One in its entirety here. Also, keep in mind that the Scripts & Plays are a more recent addition to the forums. Until it gets a larger group of regular posters, you are just going to have to stick with it.
--DM--
__________________
"When you catch an adjective, kill it. No, I don't mean utterly, but kill most of them—then the rest will be valuable." - Mark Twain
|
|
|
|
|
10-16-2004, 12:51 PM
|
#4
|
|
Wordsmith
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Back 'home' on Tinian!
Gender: Female
Posts: 11,445
|
hi, joseph!... i'm one of those who don't go to linked sites to read material... but i have written plays, i mentor playwrights, and would be happy to take a look at your work if you want to email it to me...
love and hugs, maia
maia3maia@hotmail.com
__________________
For 100% free writing help/mentoring:
www.saysmom.com
"You must BE the change you wish to see in the world." Gandhi
|
|
|
|
|
10-17-2004, 08:12 PM
|
#5
|
|
Member
Join Date: Sep 2004
Posts: 8
|
deleted post.
|
|
|
|
|
10-18-2004, 12:25 AM
|
#6
|
|
Ink Slinger
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: sort of upstate NY
Posts: 2,834
|
You are welcome, Joseph. Why don't you visit Word Games or Writing Challenge for a while? You can have a lot of fun while getting to know some of the other members. In addition, it is not required, but you may want to post an introduction thread. Let us know who you are and about your interests. It will help separate you a little from the large number of new members this site receives each month. Good luck with your writing! 
--DM--
__________________
"When you catch an adjective, kill it. No, I don't mean utterly, but kill most of them—then the rest will be valuable." - Mark Twain
|
|
|
|
|
10-31-2004, 11:47 AM
|
#7
|
|
Writer
Join Date: Oct 2004
Posts: 27
|
Hi joseph, I thought the play was pretty interesting, and I especially liked the use of Daemons and Spirits (i've always had fun pretending there are spirits and voices in my head). Something else I liked about the play was how u gave your lines a sort of slant rhyme - it gave the play a certain quality which made it fun to read. Gj on the play, keep writing!
|
|
|
|
|
10-31-2004, 08:35 PM
|
#8
|
|
Member
Join Date: Sep 2004
Posts: 8
|
deleted post.
|
|
|
|
|
Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
|
|
|
Posting Rules
|
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
|
|
|
All times are GMT -5. The time now is 08:53 AM. Powered by vBulletin, Copyright ©2000-2007, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
LinkBacks Enabled by vBSEO 3.1.0
|
|
Newsletter |
 |
|
Subscribe to Majestic
the official newsletter of Writing Forums and lit.org
|
|
Link to Us: 
|
|
