Thread: Wold you like to go to anther world?

Wow, to be perfectly honest this seems like one big chaotic mess of words.... the idea that anyone can nick your character and use it for what the hell they want is kinda... uh... I'd say dumb but I dont like to offend

Now ya see I could make all of the characters die suddenly.. except the angels maybe....

Vivian woke from the most recent dream.
"Time to stop the dreams, they freak me out so much..."
She found the knife in the kitchen. The knife found her heart.

And bam.... she's dead..

The idea is a bit flawed.

I'm gana join even though this place is hoppin'! Is that okay?

You don't have to ask permssen, just jump in!

Cefor, you CAN use other peple's chartcers, but you don't HAVE to if you don't want to. By the way, how can an idea be "flwed" if 2 pages have been writen alredy?

It is flawed because of what I posted, technically Vivian cannot be used again in this story now because I killed her in real life.

It is a shame I know, but it shows how flawed the idea is.... and the fact that you don't have to use other people's characters is totally irrelevant.
If I took control of a character just after a really important plot-mover post and then made the character do something really bad for the story it ruins it...

Can you not see my point??? Please tell me you can.

Mi was starring around herself with suprised sleepiness. It was probibaly just an other stuipid dream she thought as she walked toward the nearest tree and leaned on it. She was just going to sit there and let the chips fall were they may because she belived it was just an average dream.....

Part of this entre story is takng what the other peple wrote & writng from that (hence why it's in the Writng Challnges part). The stroy isn't runed if sombdy becmes cretve enogh to contne on. So:

Vivian’s POV:

I couldn’t believe what I had just done. Blood was all around me, & I knew it might be my last few moments alive.

“VIVIAN!” My mother screamed. The last thing I remember was my mom calling 9-1-1. Then, everything went black.

Keith’s POV:

I went to go see Vivian a few days later. She was all right, she missed her heart by about 3 inches, & her mom fond her just in time.

“Um…hello?” I asked, knocking slightly on the door. I had never visited any body in a hospital before. I wasn’t quite sure what to do.

“Keith!” Vivian said. She tossed aside the magazine she was reading. “How are you?”

“Good. Haven’t seen you around…you know where…”

“Maybe it’s the medicine? It pretty much knocks me out.” I sat in the char next to her bed as she went on. “How are you guys making out with finding Aque?”

“Nothing yet.” I said. “Are you sure she made you…um…”

“Almost kill myself?” Vivian finished. “Yeah. It’s like…she knew I was a Sleep Walker…& she controlled me to make me kill myself…” She smiled at me then. I love her smile. She was even prettier here than she was in the dream worlds…

“I get to leave in a few days.”

“So…I’ll see you soon?” I asked as I stood up to leave.

She laughed. “In your dreams, boy. In your dreams…”

No, but you changed my words there.... I said she had found her heart, and you said she didn't. But I was right because I posted it first... you can't jsut change someone's words, that is another flaw......

I think this RPG is abit hetic... no efense, but... there is no controol...

I was tryng to be cretve, & to show you that this story is not pre-plannd. Any body can do any thing, & just enjoy that what ever they write is part of somthng much biggr then thmslves. As more peple write, the more fun & challngng it gets, becase you have to base what you write on what the others have wrtten. It's not relly an RPG, more like a...story with sevrl athers.

All I ask is, that if you're instrtsed, to just give it a shot.

I am, but I think you need to lay down some rules. I was in a RPG abit like this and I found this rule to work well:
*Don't kill other people's charactors!
Also I think it would be good to have moderators....

That's just my opion..... You don't have to follow it....

Well anyhow... My charactor's name is Mi ! I posted my first post above....

Here's just some details about her.... She gets board over amazing things and its hard to suprise her.

It doesn't matter that you were being creative or being unplanned...
Oh and:
the more fun & challngng it gets, becase you have to base what you write on what the others have wrtten
That's what you just said in your post.... yet you changed my 'found her heart' (ie dead as a... dead thing) to 'missed her heart by (insert measurement here)' Therefore you contradicted yourself.... proving the way that this Group Story is written is flawed.

I am not interested.... because like I said if I created a character and wanted him to do something over the course of, lets say, three posts I wouldn't be able to because someone could come in after my first on and nick him to do something totally pointless, and/or something which stops my mini-plot. Which I know you said is part of the challenge but it's too damn annoying.

That may be true, but you did the same thing. I siad that Vivan was not able to wake up when she was captred. You then made her wake up & kill herslf. While this was a instrng twist (& I thank you for the chllnge), it did go agnst what I just wrote.

Not to be rude/dumb, but if you arn't instrted, then why are you here?

Oh snap! Virtugirl has Cefor's number!

Huh?

It's an expresion.... Any how is anyone gana write?