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    And then, and then, and then, and then.....

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    MAINTANE THE CHARACTERS CHARATARISTICS AND FEEL
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    "Look at you, you're pathetic"

    The words sting, but the eyes are what really burn.

    Here I am with the gun in my hand and the guy who had killed my father bound gagged and I can't pull the damn trigger. I feel scared and nervous, something just doesn't feel right.

    Muffled sounds of desperation come come from the bonded man sprawled ground. My brother looks at me like he always has, with dissapointment.

    "Damn pussy."

    CONTINUE.....

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    "Shut up! I can do it!"

    "No you can't. Here, just give me the fucking-"

    "Get off of me!" I shrug him off with a violence unbefitting me. "I can do it," I whisper. "I can do it,"

    My brother spits at the ground near my feet. "If you were going to do it you would have done it. I can't wait that much longer Michael!"

    "Fuck you." I lick my lips, tightening my grip on the gun. "Two shots in the head, just like father."

    "Just do it!" my brother screams.

    I wince.
    Last edited by Itsaboysname; 04-04-2007 at 07:20 AM.
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    I look into the man's eyes, as he sits bound in the chair, trying to find some sign of reason in them, some hint or clue to what lay behind that single, decisive action that took away our father.
    I find none, only a dull stupid hate glaring back at me. I raise the gun to his head, seeing his eyes widen. My brother is yelling at me, but I don't know what he's saying. At this moment nothing exists but me and my father's killer.
    My finger tightens on the trigger...

    DONE
    Last edited by lythande; 04-04-2007 at 11:12 PM.

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    I look away, the sound of the gun fills the air, silence nothing but silence. I open my yes and i look back, seeing that i missed maybe on purpose or just by luck. I turn to my brother, he is looking at me, the hatred gone from his eyes just shock his mouth is open his hand outstretched.

    "I'm sorry, if we kill him we lower ourselves to his level."

    He hits me and the gun drops firing again as it touched the ground.
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    Done *Smiles* I couldn't kill him
    Last edited by Aurasheild; 04-08-2007 at 08:19 AM.

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