Thread: How are You Haiku?

The challenge in here
is to write out your feelings
in only haiku

Take as many lines
to tell us how you're feeling
and maybe tell why

Talk about your day
Tell us a very cool tale
about your neat day

If you make comments
please make them all in Haiku
Don't let me se prose.

So I will start now
after these few little lines
of horrid haiku.

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I am Nikatu
Its very nice to meet you
how are you feeling?

I am feeling bored
but also rather content
so I am Happy

How am I today?
well, I am not really sure
ask me later on

I have a headache
with pain so fierce and so tense
I feel I will break

I dont like Haikus
I do not understand why
they only confuse

so I sit here sad
a throbbing obnoxious head
wanting to be glad.

L O L Go i
I really like your poems
They are humorous

I only wish that
all my poems incited joy
but mine suffer black

I write about truth
and the sad story it tells
often times too soon

as a lyricist
I am good with syllables
thus I'm good at this.

That is very neat
I am doing this to learn
I need to practice.

practice makes perfect
that is what everyone says
just work on it here

ah, I've had my share
practicing almost always
sculpting it with care

I feel it an art
but one that we all can learn
not born from the start

sometimes its easy
and others leave confusion
but its how I'll be

Pork chop on a plate
And leftover potato
Steaming nicely now

Baby crib napping
A very good time for writing
But then the phone rings

*** *** ***
Wally World shopping
Finding my purse is unzipped
Where is my cellphone?

Snailing through checkout
Imagining stolen calls
Or car tire crunching

Speedy exiting
Baby and cart on two wheels
Looking everywhere

Trotting to the car
Looking on the driver’s seat
Found it at long last!

Originally Posted by Foxee

Pork chop on a plate
And leftover potato
Steaming nicely now

Baby crib napping
A very good time for writing
But then the phone rings

*** *** ***
Wally World shopping
Finding my purse is unzipped
Where is my cellphone?

Snailing through checkout
Imagining stolen calls
Or car tire crunching

Speedy exiting
Baby and cart on two wheels
Looking everywhere

Trotting to the car
Looking on the driver’s seat
Found it at long last!

nice, that left me with a great feeling , oh wait, I'll put it in haiku

I am feeling blessed
by Foxee's talented write
pushing for the best

mp3 players
created by the devil
and mine is broken

This thing is evil
stupid malfunctioning screen
music files gone

Why wont it just die?
Then I could get a new one
But no, it still lives!

*putting in subscribed threads for later

ah the day ahead
what lies for me to explore
or despair instead

but I will not grieve
or think that woe befalls me
I have to believe

be careful in here
with comments and in your posts
only use haiku

that is the challenge
here in this fun haiku thread
so please be careful.
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Good morning to you
how are you feeling today?
I'm fine, how 'bout you?

Well, I'm a bit bored
And I have nothing to do
'cept write some haiku.
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Sorry to hear, your
MP3 player is broke
machines sometimes suck.

Yes, this machine sucks
I believe it is possessed
But it works well now