Thread: 50 on the nose

It was his last dollar. The last hand if he didn't win. The cards were dealt. 10, Jack, Queen, King, Two. What was he to do? Draw for one and hope for the best. Ace. The pot was his as he drew his last breath. Death by heart failure t'was.

I find that simple sentences create a better story when dealing with such a small word count. Maybe I'm just a bad non-writer.

"Death by heart failure t'was"

LOL Simple sweet & to da point hehehehe I like the story