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  1. #16
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    Ghosts crowd the young child's fragile eggshell mind
    In an instant I remember everything,
    A shyness that is criminally vulgar.
    I've given up hiding and I've started to fight
    Inside these misty circles.
    ~At the end of every short story the reader should feel like a cloud was lifted from the face of the moon~

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    I'm impressed...

    I find myself unable to write the things myself, but I've actually put a few of these "poems" to simple guitar music. Quite interesting I must say! Some of them make great songs.

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    I had a dream last night
    You said I didn't have a clue
    So safe here in your arms
    Nothing heals me like you do.

    The cold wind blows
    Can you tell me it was fate?
    I'd like to move on and
    make the most of the night
    Before it's too late.
    Before it's too late.

    I'm drowning in my dreams
    Funny how it fades away
    When love and hate collide
    Oh, thats the price you pay.

    Love won't let me wait
    Under cover of the night
    if you want to kill the day
    Can we start over, I'll make it right.

    The cold wind blows
    Can you tell me it was fate?
    I'd like to move on and
    make the most of the night
    Before it's too late.
    Before it's too late.

    *My thanks to:

    Faith Hill (You're Still Here)
    Destiny's Child (So Good)
    Staind (Warm Safe Place)
    Heather Nova (London Rain)
    Gary Moore (Cold Wind Blows)
    Darkseed (Frozen Tears)
    Zakk Wilde (No More Tears)
    Ozzy Osbourne (Revelation)
    Dawn of Dreams (Dreamcycle)
    Harsh Light of Day (Fades Away)
    Def Leppard (When Love and Hate Collide)
    Neil Young (The price you pay)
    Rolling Stones (Under Cover of the Night)
    Watchmen (Kill the Day)
    7 Mile (Make It Right)
    "... over the entrance to the gates of the temple of science are written the words: 'Ye must have faith" - Max Planck

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    That was a good one. Here we go:

    Da dyeee da doo, da dyeee da doo, away a woo woo, away a woo woo,
    Dead.. D.. D.. Da... DA.... Dee,
    Deeper,
    Deeper,
    Deeper feelings reoccur
    D.. Don't rely on us
    G..
    G..
    Get yourself,
    Get yourself high,
    Oh, NO!
    She,
    She just wants to be,
    She just wants to be,
    My heart and soul they're free.
    But now I'm home, yeh I'm free
    Did I pass?
    Yes, The Test?

    How many roads must a man walk down?
    Is this it?
    Oh,
    Oh,
    Ohhh,
    Salvation.

    Did I pass?
    Yes, The Test?

    Awwwwwwww,
    Freakout!
    Oh baby, baby
    Awwwwwww,
    *bass riff*
    Wait, hold up
    Just dance for elation
    Yeh.

    Sometimes you've got to get inside,
    Heaven and Hell.
    But so it is,
    Just like you said it would be.

    Did I pass?
    Yes, The Test?

    --
    With cudos to The Talking Heads, T-Rex, R.E.M and The Chemical Brothers, Bob Dylan, B.R.M.C, Chic, Pink Floyd and Damien Rice. Oh, and I'm sure you noticed the Britnet Spears lyric. Haha.

    Man, that was fun.
    C.A.

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    Chances come and Cancer's go
    You know its all a show
    What we got to show
    For it

    fOR IT

    Quick fix tricks
    Shallow blow
    We know

    FOR IT

    Guess my name
    Allways the same
    s a game

    We play as we pay
    cant you see
    Its only me

    For it
    One thing in life is certain you wont get out alive

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    Just when I thought I'd downloaded all the .mp3s I want (except a few BOC songs), Claire, you mention songs by Gary Moore, Ozzy Osbourne, Neil Young, and The Stones that I haven't even heard! Sigh...time to load up Kazaa.

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    Okay, I really wanted to do this challenge; however it seemed to give me a hard time. I don't know why I had such a difficult time with this one but this is what I have so far. Personally, it sucks and It's not finished. I just don't know where to go with it anymore.

    I just graduated from college and I wanted this piece (challenge) to be based on graduating and starting a new life. This is what I was able to come up with but I don't know how to finish it or how to make it not suck as much. Any help would be greatly appreciated!

    There's a time a for joy, a time for tears
    Cause we're moving on and we can't slow down
    And oh how the years go by
    And life is a road and I want to keep going, love is a river and I want keep flowing, life is road now and forever, what a wonderful journey.

    Take a walk in the park when you feel down
    Shout with open eyes (to the miracle of life)
    Imagine there's no heaven

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    Heh I compiled this without the knowledge of the "one line from each song" thing... I'm going to post it anyway, there are a few repeats.... simply because it's pretty awesome. It's in song format, obviously I won't write music to it but it's got verses and a chorus and bridge and stuff.

    Late I will write one according to the rules, this is just for fun.

    PS: Anyone who can identify every song, or at least every artist, without searching for them (like on a lyrics search engine) will be my new GOD!!! I WILL BOW DOWN TO YOU AND GROVEL AT YOUR FEET FOR ETERNITY heh..... I'll tell you there are exactly 20 songs and 16 artists used =^..^=

    *~*~*~*

    My Poison
    compiled by Cora Windover

    I'm so tired of being here
    Wild, wild nights of running
    Contemplating nothing but escaping
    Finally making it
    Chasing the years of my life

    Looking back on the memory
    I miss the old crowd sometimes
    Reminiscing this and that and having
    Such a good time
    Oh how the years go by...

    Poisoned hearts can never change
    It's funny, I don't remember being chained
    I'll keep your secrets, I'll hold your ground
    It's all coming back to me now
    I am pulsing the blood in your veins
    Everything is different now

    Well I'd like to figure out a way to leave
    The more you stay inside of me
    Jumping fences, climbing trees and
    Trying to get away
    I will forget you when I die

    Poisoned hearts can never change
    It's funny, I don't remember being chained
    I'll keep your secrets, I'll hold your ground
    It's all coming back to me now
    I am that deep pool, I am that dark spring
    Everything is different now

    Dust and sunlight
    Quietly crept in and changed us all
    A starving soul can't live like that for long...
    Rain clouds come to parade again
    I've wasted time, I've wasted me
    Waiting softly for someone to believe

    Poisoned hearts can never change
    It's funny, I don't remember being chained
    I'll keep your secrets, I'll hold your ground
    It's all coming back to me now
    I am living to nourish you, cherish you
    You both belong together now...
    'Cuz she believes in you

    *~*~*~*
    Your father may be father to all the boys, but still...
    He's not the man who sired you; so marry who ye will.

    Proliffick ~.^

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    All I have to say to that is WOW!!! That was amazing!!!
    Love,
    Kermie04

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    aw thanks you're so sweet =^..^=
    Your father may be father to all the boys, but still...
    He's not the man who sired you; so marry who ye will.

    Proliffick ~.^

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    haha thanx but seriously, that was amazing!
    Love,
    Kermie04

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    When I look at you
    Every familiar face
    Turned away in disgrace
    The sky is the color of blue...

    enh I have a headache, I can't think >_<
    Your father may be father to all the boys, but still...
    He's not the man who sired you; so marry who ye will.

    Proliffick ~.^

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    This doesn't quite fit the rules of the challenge I'm afraid, but I wrote it a few weeks ago, and thought I'd throw it in anyway - coz I like it!

    Bye Bye Love

    This is the end (as someone once said)
    My beautiful friend (I think he's dead!)
    And so are we - it's a crying shame
    But I know who to bless and I know who to blame!

    My Angelou, well he's gone down the road
    And he don't want no one to share his load
    Our crazy love - it was all in the game
    Poor Tupelo honey is out of the frame

    Well I've been loving you darlin' - seems like time out of mind
    But your stone's gone a-rolling and left me behind
    Make me feel your love? Well I waited all night!
    But don't you think twice baby, it's all right

    This sad soul music's giving me the blues
    You could change sadness to sweetness if you choose
    But you're history when the going gets tough
    Oh sometimes baby, love just ain't enough

    Seems your black magic woman has lost her power
    Witchy woman waits in the midnight hour
    Oh now you feel fine cos here comes the sun?
    But it's to late baby - I'm already gone!

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