Thanks a lot for the help and information

Did you get a chance to see what I wrote for the thread? I was looking for some feedback on it as well. I am trying to improve my writing. Right now I would consider myself a novice writer but I would like to improve. Thanks a lot! The reason I am asking on this thread is because everyone who contributed to the thread so far seems to be an expert writer and that is where I would like to be, since I love to do it so much.