Thread: New fantasy RPG?

I'm done now. It took me a bit longer than I realized to actually write it.

Well I am going to read right now

Name: Lilith

Age: 21

Appearance: She has long, black hair that reaches the small of her back. Her face is small and fierce, her lips are pale and her eyes are also black like liquid darkness. Across her back, shoulders and arms she has a tattoo of two intertwined snakes. Each of her palms has a head of one of the snakes on it. She wears the circlet of a head priestess that worships the Goddess Inanna. The circlet is a fine golden band with a carving of an eagle head. She is tall and slim. She also wears their traditional gown. The traditional gown is black, hooded and has no sleeves.

History: She was abandoned as a babe. An old tinker found her while on his travels. He recognised the tattoo that she was born with as a symbol of the evil Goddess Inanna. The tinker gave Lilith to a small guild of Priestesses he knew worshipped on a mountainside next to the village Doorn- where they could avoid persecution. Lilith grew into a full priestess. She quickly rose through the rankings, helped by her birth mark/tattoo, which some believed to be a blessing from the Inanna. Eventually she reached the level of High Priestess. After a year in this position she was banished from the cult for killing a priestess who was trying to introduce new interpretations of Inanna’s scripture. Half a year later she managed to undo her banishment because she convinced the cult that Inanna herself had inspired her to commit the murder. She was once again able to resume the position of High Priestess.

and a priestess was born nice CS

another one off the list! *ticks list*

and a priestess was born, nice CS

*takes a bow* Thank you!

I just made a small edit because I think it would be difficult for her to join the group if she was no longer part of the cult.

lol, yeah your intro kinda is based on that XD

I really like the start of this story very nice Jessi

so far so good!

Yes, I like the way the story is going so far. I think its going to become more interesting once the journey begins.

I think it will too Can't wait

well I'm with our new brother on this one

This is only going to get better as we go on

OK had some ideas...

First off, once we have the horses sorted we'll do a fast forward to about a week in for my really cool idea (which you'll all have a part in... we each have to create a little prophesy for somebody else's character then you have to write the prophesy into the story for your character so it comes true somehow) and then...

... once we have gotten to the king, heard the main prophesy and begun the quest, we each will write a fairly major conflict or difficulty for our characters to overcome before they return to the king to fulfill the prophesy.

So start thinking about what little prophesy you'll make for somebody else and who you may make it for. And start thinking about what conflict/prob our characters will have to deal with once we leave the king.

Sounds great Jessi I will start thinking

The fast forward part sounds fine.

I didn't expect the rest. I'll give it some thought. Please forgive me now if I don't do a good job writing a prophesy.

For the major conflict problem to over come. Are we each writing the conflict problem for our own character? So I would write something for James and that would not include the other characters. Or are we each to write some thing that all of our characters face together? For example one of us would have our characters meet a dragon and another of us would have our characters have to figure out a puzzle or maze.