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    Alex laughed and stood up,
    "A walk? No!" he pulled Elvira to her feet and held her close, "I want to dance!"
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    "I want to dance!" Elvira put her arms around Alex and laughed 'I loved to dance, but we don't seem to have any music'. Elvira looked at Alex cheakily 'Perhaps you could eh sing?'
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    Perhaps you could eh sing?

    Alex's eyes sparkled,
    "I thought you'd never ask!" he spun Elvira out of his arms and out the door. He followed after her and caught her again,

    "You're just too good to be true
    I can't take my eyes off you
    You feel like heaven to touch
    I wanna hold you so much
    At last love has arrived
    And I thank God I'm alive
    You're just too good to be true
    I can't take my eyes off you

    Bada...!"
    Alex kicked his feet out and he began to drag Elvira along in a fast still of close waltz,

    "I love you baby
    And if it's quite all right
    I need you baby to warm a lonely night
    I love you baby
    Trust in me when I say

    Oh pretty baby
    Don't bring me down, I pray
    Oh pretty baby
    Now that I've found you stay
    So let me love you baby
    Let me love you"
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    Eliva loved it and she loved to dance. She closed her eyes to forget everything and just gave in and danced. It was like she was flying. She smiled hapily. She wondered if he did, love her.
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    Kasia tucked Juli's arm under hers and led her out the door toward the kitchen, unable to help but listen to every other sound for a couple of miles.

    "Are you hungry?" she asked Juli, "Thirsty? Can I get you anything?" she asked as she made her way toward the hollow sound of a dripping tap, her ears guiding her through the great mansion toward the kitchen. It was the size of her entire apartment.

    "Oh bloody hell." she said. "Xander sure kept this pretty bloody quiet." she said. Juli nodded absently at her side.

    Then her ears picked up something else.

    "Xan!" she yelled.

    "Diesel vehicle just turned onto the driveway, big, probably a van. You expecting anyone?" she called out, suddenly afraid.
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    Alex suddenly stopped dancing and his ears pricked up slightly,
    "Mmmm... appears we are about to receive some company." he smiled and gave Elvira a quick kiss on the lips before spinning her slowly out of his arms, "I'll come back for my second dance mon cher."
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    "I'll come back for my second dance mon cher." Elvira smiled 'Any time'. She followed Alex. If there would be trouble she wanted to be near the other's. She wasn't much of a fighter, but she would be able to heal them if it was needed.
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    Xander sat in the hall where Juli was previously in. He had no idea. He was just simply asked to join the group. They told him it was an anti-terror organization. His hand tightened on an antique chair, causing it to crush and splinter in his grip. Those lying little cowards--
    Xan! Diesel vehicle just turned onto the driveway, big, probably a van. You expecting anyone?

    He sprinted out of the room and vaulted himself off of the banister, landing on the first story. "What?!" He rushed into the kitchen where Kaisa looked frightened. "Stay hidden. I'll go handle this."
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    Stay hidden. I'll go handle this

    Alex laughed pleasently to himself as he ran into the kitchen,
    "And why doesn't that fill me with confidence?"
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    Elvira followed Alex into the kitchen and joined Kasia.
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    "It's... a delivery van I think." Kasia told the others as Xander disappeared from view. "I can hear the driver talking on his two-way about a package for Xan, and he's eating... chips. Sounds like a lot of paper in the back of the van."
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    Alex frowned,
    "Well its better than men with guns I guess." he smiled again, "Not as fun though."
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    Elvira relaxed a little as a delivery van did not sound too dangerous and said 'I can deal with a little less fun, so eh no guns please'.
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    The FedEx van, for that was what it was, rolled to a stop outside Xander's mansion. The young driver gazed around nervously - in awe of the majesty of the place before he got out of his vehicle. He quickly picked up the package he had to deliver and started forward to find somebody to deliver it to.

    He saw Xander, looking ordinary enough coming toward him and looked up hopefully.

    "I have a package for a Xander? It doesn't have a last name but was very clear on the address." he said.
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