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    Writer Gabriel Gray's Avatar
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    I edited it, he is just a followed of the shifta - no powers but hey, thats where he gets dangerous right? He's just a guy sent to find that little spoilt bitch and drag her back to the council. Perhaps he will be bested in the fight, as she has powers herself? Or perhaps there will be a third party who interrupt the whole thing... This could be really good

    -Edit note to the girl im chasing, you have like 10 guys after you - feel free for them to attack you and for you to kill them. Thats why they are there, my character will be flying solo - so go ahead and include these punks in your story, perhaps some will be trying to infiltrate your army in disguise - others might just try to rush you whilst your on your horse or something. hell you could even have a situation where they kidknap you and you have to use your wits to escape before my character approaches
    Last edited by Gabriel Gray; 08-01-2008 at 11:54 AM.
    Something i've been working on for a while now, it has a slow start but please read it and comment - It would mean a lot to me

    http://www.writingforums.com/fiction...ml#post1211308

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    Name: Captain First Class Number 7346 (Also known as Drew McGaith)
    Age: 19
    Gender: male
    Appearance: Drew is normally seen in his armour that consists of a silvery breast plate, arm guards, legs guards and a helmet with a red feather coming from the top. He has brown hair that he had once tried to keep long but the army had forced his to cut it short. His eyes are green but one of the has a small cut on it and a scar that shows the path of the blade that had cut through the white of his eye, but fortunately it doesn't effect his vision. He is also quite tall, about 6 foot 3 inches, but is still considered small by his superiors who are quite easily over seven foot tall.
    Alignment: Shifta (secretly, Annui)
    Personality: Drew is a caring person and has said, on more than one occassion, that he was only in the army because he was forced to be. Drew actually wants to be a simple baker. But Drew is also prone to the battle rage that sometimes comes over soldiers, turning him into an uncaring killing machine. He is very sorry for all the past killings he was responsible for and has begun to go to secret Annui gatherings to repent for his sins.
    Background: Drew was born into a family of soldiers and so he was trained from birth to be a soldier. He was pressed into the service of the Shifta at the age of ten. He began to work with the slaves of the Shifta as a guard and got really quite friendly with them and even let a few of them out for walks and fresh air. But that was before he got transferred. He became a front line soldier when he was sixteen and got off guard duty and became a more and more depressed. When the power manifested itself in him the Shifta promoted him up to the rank of Captain First Class.
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    Sounds good to me, join in when you find an appropriate opening
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    Grabriel Gray.
    Can you by any chance write in the R.p.G soon?
    Or at least send me a pm if your not going to be able to post anytime soon.
    As I can't keep lingering around with Aryn and the battle.

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