Thread: Passionate romance on the Greek isles...

Passionate Romance on the Greek isles…

Story:
Paul, 35, has a Harvard Business School (HBS) MBA, is very wealthy and is single. As he is well experienced in guiding MBA applicants an elderly friend asks him to advise Sophie, 24, also single, in her successful HBS MBA application. Sophie is as beautiful as a Greek Goddess and extremely multitalented and smart. They both live in Athens, Greece. They madly fall in love. They date. But, so does an underlying tragedy appear. As their love passionately blossom, so does their tragedy sprout.
On their first date she tells him, “I respect you for not having taken advantage of me”… Does she mean it? Or does she badly want him? How badly does he want her? What is in their minds? What signals do they exchange? How do they interpret them? What will happen?
He visits her at HBS on her first year. They travel together, twice during the summer after her first year. Paul reserves two single rooms on their first trip to NYC although he badly wants her. She makes her advances but he rejects them because of what she told him on their very first date. She is crushed. After the first trip to NYC and her rejection she decides to give him a second chance.
He invites her to Paris. She sends him strong signals, but the NYC scenario is repeated. Both want each other badly but Paul is afraid. Sophie is fuming mad. She decides that the next time Paul invites her to a trip she will refuse his offer and dump him. Paul attends her graduation. Shortly after, he emails her with another invitation to a sandy luxury Greek resort. He mentions two single rooms, again. She mails him back declining his offer angrily. He calls her. All hell breaks loose. She is fuming mad. He interrupts her proposing a suite. She talks for ½ an hour explaining that she wants to be flirted, and feel wanted. Paul explains that he only followed what she told him on the first date. She madly goes on for another ½ hour explaining that it’s the man’s job to do the courting and consummate the relationship. She feels insulted, humiliated and ignored. They agree that she calm down, think cool and to text him. Three hours pass and she texts: “Let’s go”. They go to the resort and it happens. The consummation is described indirectly, obliquely without the words sex, making out etc. ever being used there or at any other part of the book. He proposes marriage. She warmly accepts. They spend a week, on a friend’s villa on the green Greek island of Kefalonia, with its white beaches, azure sea and a tall mountain with very dark fir trees. They stay in an Athens resort. They buy a house near Athens. They travel to Switzerland, Boston and NYC on business. They visit Cuba and Saint Bart’s. They travel to India, Tanzania and Namibia and then to Paris. Paul’s friend lends them his yacht and they cruise barren, off the beaten track jewels of islands with their white washed houses. They get married a few days before New Year’s and spend their honeymoon in Venice…

Themes:
· Romance: The book is very passionately, romantically written. It is very amorous, dreamy and atmospheric as their love dialogues spread throughout the book.
· Poetry: Their love poems dot the book. The writer finds ways to interject their love poems exchanges even when they are together.
· Travel: the writer emphasizes detailed, vivid scenery and atmosphere description wherever they travel. He tries to make you feel that you are actually at the spot.
· Balanced life: in Athens they see Paul’s friends who are mostly wealthy. But they also see his former colleagues from his past jobs who lead a humbler life.
· Philosophy: a lot of their philosophical deliberations enhance the book. A central theme is poverty. When visiting HBS they endow a Chair. Its purpose: to convince American Corporations that by investing in third world countries they can both profit but, also help these countries create jobs and develop economically. They promote the Chair with PR firms and lobbying firms and their cause is a success…

I'm confused, is this a short story? There is a lot happening, I feel dizzy. Is this a plot for a book? Is this what you want to write or something you have written? Seems very well thought out, is there going to be anything edgy or unpredictable happening? I like the idea of interjecting the characters poems into the story.

Sorry, just noticed that you have posted a first chapter for this book which answers some of my questions. I will go and read that now thank you