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02-06-2005, 08:30 PM
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no I haven't seen that. I don't know...I just invisioned white wings, I might changed it. She's supposed to be like totaly innocent though a vampire. I'm still unsure of plot, I just am rolling around the whole "village attacks" thing. its cliche and all but what else could come out? If she was "Dark" and not so innoccent as I'm thinking gray wings would fit well.
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02-06-2005, 08:34 PM
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wait... i have that book...
that's so weird that i just remembered that. my friend got me it as a gift when we did our own commentary on the interview with the vampire movie. (it was making fun of it, even though we like it. the movie gets no where near as good as the book.)
psycic vampires feed off the auras of humans. an aura is the energy field around your body. if you are being drained of this, you usually do not know. you will feel incredibly tired and worn out and not know why. a way to block out these attacks is to either mentally shield yourself in a field of white light, or when you are sitting, to physically cross your legs at the ankles and cross your fingers together, but leave your two index fingers uncrossed, pointing up to the cieling or sky, with the pads of these two fingers touching.
yes, yes. my vat of useless knowledge. (unless you suffer from vampire attacks.)
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02-06-2005, 08:37 PM
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lol, my friend lives off his useless knowledge, it's fun to get him going and just sit and watch him ramble abotu stuff.
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02-06-2005, 08:47 PM
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it would be fun if you had genderless angels and vampires.
that, and if like, there was a war, and like they said no real good or evil, and the one vampire was feeding off the one angel, and for some reason the angel likes it. sexy sexy.
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02-06-2005, 08:48 PM
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lol that sounds so....interresting. you should write it yourself
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02-06-2005, 08:52 PM
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haha... no way lol. im already gonna write a little blurb about acid dropping and clubbing.
and no, with me at the helm of a project like that, it would get too sexual. trust me. even if they have no genders.
but really, there needs to be something original about this.
my story is about angels. and trust me, its not the type of angel you would really think of. you have to either work hard to get a good original story, or stop thinking completely.
thats what i did. i didnt try to think of anything, and it came to me. try that as well. you would be surprised what your imagination does to get your attention back when youre not using it.
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02-06-2005, 08:53 PM
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thats a good idea. I have the characters laid out more-or-less but i can't get away from a cliche plot. so maybe I should just not think about it. thats actualy how I got this story idea at all. I hadn't written anything for a while and then I just thought up the little characters and basics of it.
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02-06-2005, 08:59 PM
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oh, and by the way, what if she wasnt actually a witch, but was made of gravy? huh? ever think of that?
annnnnnyway....
what if there was less of a difference between angels and vampires than we know? what if prayers arent answered sometimes because angels feed off them?
that would be terrible, horrible, unwritable, but damn fun to set down to paper, and a great shocker. 
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02-06-2005, 09:00 PM
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hee hee hee, yes i beleive it would. that would totaly put thrash to reoligious comunities. Angels feeding off their prayers, just think of the chaos they might have in churches?
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02-06-2005, 09:02 PM
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or perhaps not all of them do, of course, just a few.
a select group.
and now ill stop making up some crazy ass story line and spare you hehe.
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02-06-2005, 09:05 PM
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lol. I'm triyng to come up with random story lines to work off of. the angel being concidered an outcast through the vampire community(as if there ever were such thing!) or perhaps a "vanhellsing" type character trying to save her and purge her of her vampire ways(vanhellsing type character as in the one from the 2004 movie, not the book). I'm trying to step far far away from anything too cliche and into "new and never seen" but thats usualy hard to come by.
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02-06-2005, 09:08 PM
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oh, is your lead character a girl?
im afraid i cant help you, there. i dont write well with female characters, unless they are crazy or unusual in some way, and more so than just being a vampire.
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02-06-2005, 09:09 PM
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lol, well theres too main characters. bianca the angel-vampire and vladimir the vampire whom kidnapped her and she is madly in love with. or something. i'm toying with everythnig currently. nothing is actually anything, its like in the total stage of "nothingness"
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02-06-2005, 09:13 PM
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NO vladimar.
please...
please, change the name. for the sake of all. that will get you killed.
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02-06-2005, 09:16 PM
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no using the name vladimir? okay than i'll change it
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