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Old 08-05-2004, 08:11 PM   #1
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Help with Fiction Writing Style

I have a question about style I suppose. I am wondering how accepted it is in fiction, when writing in third person omniscient, how acceptable it is to have the writer say things like....blah blah he thinks.

For example I will give you the sentence I am struggling with:

He thinks it is very possible to have a hurricane in the spring in New Jersey even if it has never happened in all his life.

Or other sentences like: He/she feels...(fill in whatever he/she feels)

Do you think it would be better to find a way to get his/her feelings/thoughts across without actually writing the he thinks/she feels type deal?

Thanks in advance for your help.
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Old 08-05-2004, 08:47 PM   #2
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Tori, I think it really depends on what you are trying to accomplish. What does it mean when you say something one way? For one thing, it means you didn't say it another way. So a choice should reveal something about the nature of the story, whether that's to heighten tension, emotional directness, or convey characterization.

Some stories have been written from the third person focused perspective that relay information on the thoughts and feelings of the character that way to emphasize isolation. They do this because there may not be a lot of interaction with other characters.

Other stories have the characters showing what they think and feel through action. This has a very dramatic feel to it and requires the reader to pay attention and think with the character. This method is often advocated by writing coaches and schools. It is very cinematic.

You could do both, or neither. It just depends on what you want to say.

I probably didn't help much, but I tried.
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Old 08-05-2004, 09:07 PM   #3
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hmmm yes. I am at that point where I am second guessing myself I guess (see? heh). Going back and trying to make things all neat and tidy. I found I used the word "just" in almost every other sentence and was like...What am I thinking?! Now I am wondering if I am using too many I feel, I think sentences.

I think I will go back and see if there is any possible way I can re-work some of them. I appreciate the advice and knowledge thank you.
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