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Some help if you would...
Ok, so for my newest story, The Outcast Priest , there are several characters. What I really need is some help developing the next phase of the story. The part about Marin has already happened {refer to story} but the other characters have yet to be encountered. Except Zaruu, whose involvement I am most likely writing as you read this. All suggestions shall be taken and gladly used.
Quick rundown of characters:
Ro-rando(which is Roland in Japanese)- is a simple boy who was once a street urchin. Master Lung, of the training dojo Ro-rando once attended, took him in. After a bad accident, Ro-rando was sent away. He now just wants to do good with what he learned. Is he really a good guy? Could he somehow turn bad?
Marin- is a siran who gave her special bracelet away but wants it back so she can travel once more. It was given to Yue, who just wanted a talisman to make her water elemental powers stronger. Ro-rando helps her out with a simple suggestion. He leaves before she can thank him or anything else. Perhaps she meets him later?
Zaruu- is a vampire that infects the Lady Kida’s mansion home. In the disguise of her late loving husband, Zaruu is slowly draining the lady of the house and her servants dry. Literally. What can Ro-rando do to stop the fiend?
Koto- is a fox woman in a future town. She is a docile creature and doesn’t want to hurt anyone. Ro-rando enters her town in the middle of her trial. She is being tried for multiple murders, but with some deduction can Ro-rando figure out who is really killing off the village’s children? {It is not Koto}
Yue- is a pure demon of unknown power. Despite all attempts to learn more about her, she still remains a mysterious factor in the world. She is rumored to be a remnant of the old times. What part will she play in Ro-rando’s future {if she is in his future}?
Thank you for reading and if you are interested, read the story. As I said, all ideas and suggestions shall be reviewed and used if to my liking.
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