In the story I am currently working on, I have a particular scenario that I am not sure is realistic or not.
A young boy of grade-school age (I'll call him Nate) lives with his father (let's call him Tom) in an old suburban home in Chicago. Nate's mother died a short time before, and her having come from a very rich family, leaves her husband and son with a large inheritance. Tom begins to exhibit mental illness presumably brought on by the loss of his wife. His illness manifests itself in strange ways, though: he begins hearing and seeing people that aren't there, and he sometimes thinks Nate is a stranger. Over time, Tom's illness grows worse and worse. Eventually he hires someone to stay with them and help take care of Nate, but the father and son grow farther and farther apart.
When Nate is 10, Tom is murdered. (Yes, Nate is an unfortunate kid..!) Nate is the inheritor of his parent's money as well as the house. An executor of estate, a lawyer whom Tom had previously hired, advises Nate to sell or at least rent the house. But Nate cannot bear the thought of losing the house, so they come up with a solution to where the lawyer will send in the property taxes on the house every year, and hire workers to perform occasional maintenance. In return for this, the lawyer collects a small fee out of Nate's inheritance money.
Nate is sent to live in foster care, having no living relatives. Over time, as a teenager, he becomes distracted by life and doesn't pay the house much mind. Finally, he turns 18 and goes off to school out-of-state.
When he is 24, at the story's beginning, he decides to finally sell the house, but before he does he goes back to Chicago to go through the property and maybe find out more about his father's illness, and possibly gain closure about his traumatic childhood with Tom. He arrives at the house and upon going inside finds that it has had some intruders over the years -- smaller items and electronics have been pilfered, and there are cigarette butts and empty beer cans and ragged blankets. But the house is pretty much intact.
I had a couple of questions pertaining to the plausibility of these events.
First, would an executor actually do this kind of service? This is a lawyer that Tom had hired, not a family member or friend. Also, since it is doubtful that a 10-year-old boy would know anything about property taxes or the like, the lawyer would have to be the one to suggest this arrangement.
Secondly, in cases where an orphaned child enters the foster-care system, and that child is the inheritor of a large sum of money, what happens to the money? Who keeps it? Is some of it doled out to the foster parents for the care of the child? Or is it kept somewhere safe until the child turns 18?
Third, the house sits empty for fourteen years. There is minor maintenance work done on it, like the leaves cleaned out of the gutter in the fall, and the lawn is mowed every so often, but I envision it becoming something of a creepy, old eyesore in the neighborhood that the neighbors don't like, but can't really do anything about because it's not falling apart or posing a safety risk or anything. I know that empty houses drive down property values of the surrounding homes, but would there be any city ordinances violated by it just sitting there empty for that long? Would the city move to intervene, seizing up the property or anything?
Finally, would the amount of damage caused by trespassers and delinquent kids I describe be realistic? This is an old suburb of Chicago... a pretty affluent, stately place, not a ghetto, but I wasn't sure about the level of vandalism I had in the story... does it sound believable?
Sorry this post is so long. Any answers or advice would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks!



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