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    I AM FOREVER YOURS

    My heart will always bear your name
    No matter where I go,
    And years will pass me by yet still
    My love will always grow..

    Along with every breath I make
    I wish for your embrace,
    Or just to gently place my hands
    On your angelic face..

    Right from the very day we met
    I knew inside you'll be,
    The girl who will complete my life
    And love no one but me..

    Your gentle touch, your sweet caress
    Your most endearing eyes,
    Are all the fills my soul with bliss
    That goes beyond the skies..

    More than the time I shall exist
    My songs for you will play,
    Until the stars all cease to burn
    My love for you will stay..

    And little drops of rain that kiss
    The earth may fall no more,
    But until then I'll treasure you
    And lovingly adore..

    Great as the kings of legends told
    My words will never break,
    And soon before your eyes unfold
    A vow that I will make..

    Dreams don't come true, or so I thought
    But then you proved me wrong,
    For I have always dreamed of you
    And then you came along..

    And so my sweetheart, look at me
    And let me hold your hands,
    I swear to love you all my life
    Until forever ends..

    Let's take this journey far across
    Where ocean meets the sky,
    I'll hold you close, I wont let go
    I'll never say goodbye..

    Even the most of trials come
    I'll stand and make it through,
    And tell the world they can not take
    Away my love for you..

    Now and for always you will be
    The princess of my life,
    You are the greatest gift I had
    My ever dearest wife
    Look to the shine side of your life

    And feel the taste of happinese

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    Oh my god, the emotion that built up inside of me reading that. I loved it so much. Seriously you made my eyes whell up. Truely brilliant, id love to read more from you.
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    Ew. I hated it. It drips cliche contentment.


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    I liked it to the point it displayed your true romantic view and heart felt feelings for this person in your life.
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    Very emotional and very much seems like something you see on a greeting card. Thank you for sharing.

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