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    Post Core of Everything by:Rhealyn Letada

    What do you think of this?
    Core of Everything

    Speak your mind
    Your mind is an infinite processor
    The processor that helps you think
    Think, think with many thoughts
    Thoughts that make you wonder
    Wonder why the hell you were created
    Creation of many wishes
    Wishes that helps flourish emotions
    Emotions that make you feel
    Feel Happiness and Pain
    Happiness and Pain mixed together is ironic
    Ironic is Life
    Life is the core
    Core of everything . . .
    Everything you talk about
    Your Talking about something;
    related to Life
    Speak it out

    Rhea Lyn Letada
    Life is never boring, but some people choose to be bored.
    - quote of a psychotherapist[cannot remember]

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    I have never heard of this poet. I'm guessing she is a fav of yours? Still - I think that this is devoid of any emotion. Mostly, I think because it is VEERY telly and not showing at all. Some images or vignettes, anything to make me feel some sympathy or connection would have been better, Nevertheless it is encouraging from one aspect. If that got published we here at the forums can do more than hope. I should think we could take enormous heart from it. Anyway - I wasn't liking it. huni.
    each time we see the face ...it is our own ideas of him which we recognize. Proust

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