Thread: Core of Everything by:Rhealyn Letada

What do you think of this?
Core of Everything

Speak your mind
Your mind is an infinite processor
The processor that helps you think
Think, think with many thoughts
Thoughts that make you wonder
Wonder why the hell you were created
Creation of many wishes
Wishes that helps flourish emotions
Emotions that make you feel
Feel Happiness and Pain
Happiness and Pain mixed together is ironic
Ironic is Life
Life is the core
Core of everything . . .
Everything you talk about
Your Talking about something;
related to Life
Speak it out

Rhea Lyn Letada

I have never heard of this poet. I'm guessing she is a fav of yours? Still - I think that this is devoid of any emotion. Mostly, I think because it is VEERY telly and not showing at all. Some images or vignettes, anything to make me feel some sympathy or connection would have been better, Nevertheless it is encouraging from one aspect. If that got published we here at the forums can do more than hope. I should think we could take enormous heart from it. Anyway - I wasn't liking it. huni.