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  1. 12-09-2011, 11:20 AM #1
    Jon M
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    Buster

    poem (greatly) revised.
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    English words are like prisms. Empty, nothing inside, and still they make rainbows.
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    I liked this, even the rough structure suited it.
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  3. 12-11-2011, 06:42 PM #3
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    This may very well be out of character for me, but... I like this a lot. It seems like I can always find fault with something but not this time. I like the structuring, the colloquialism, everything. In fact, I would almost like to see some typos.
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