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Old 06-03-2008, 12:37 PM   #1
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Holding you close to me,
you're the one I most want to see,
but if we let ourselves free,
all that's good will cease to be.

Blue eyes I see right through,
caught on something that might be new,
you saw yourself and quickly away you flew.

Maybe it's just not you,
at the time I already knew,
it was that lying ring of darkest blue.
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It's nice, but would you mind deciphering?
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i would mind deciphering because you would mind the meaning.
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short-n-sweet, but probably has indept meaning.
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short-n-sweet, but probably has indept meaning.
it has meaning, I just don't want to share it with everyone... not right now anyways.
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