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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 05-31-2008, 11:51 PM   #1
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seconds

Is to love just a waste,
as pointless as to hate,
you may as well just wait,
until we disintegrate.
the world will have its way.

you have to surrender,
to powerful to overcome,
why does it matter,
my heart is a slum.

you were waiting for a moment,
but the moment never came,
all your time is spent,
slowly slipping far away.

so just keep on dreaming,
its all to keep you from screaming,
our lives wasting away,
seconds dripping like rain,
down my window pane.
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Old 06-01-2008, 12:47 AM   #2
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I'd suggest reading a lot of poetry to help move yourself away from the need for forced rhymes.
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Old 06-01-2008, 07:05 AM   #3
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I don't think it's need, necessarily, but preference.
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