Damien.

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Come down down, they'll say,
But everything looks perfect from far away.
Come down down, but we'll stay.

Baron

Not a haiku but there's a haiku quality to the feel of this one. Another short piece that works for me.

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jellyfish

Damien,

I've read a couple of your posts without commenting. Largely, because I'm a novice, but I have liked what I read. I liked 'splayed leaf'. I'm wondering if you could take out 'former' in line three since 'I once' sort of implies formerly. Just a thought. I enjoyed this.

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jellyfish

just another day in paradise