tristiano

This slimy piece of rubber,
all between me and you,
I will never use another,
of these balloons covered in goo,
you don't want to be a mother,
me, one day, maybe,
but if disaster ever strikes,
we can always drown the baby

Asphodelus

Strange, I don't really know how I feel about it. But I do like the last line about drowning the baby, I love Gothing-era sounding endings, with a grotesque twist.

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"All right...I'm glad it's a girl. And I hope she'll be a fool — that's the best thing a girl can be in this world, a beautiful little fool."- Daisy

JHB

Sounds like a rap.

Baron

it works.

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lin

So she doesn't want to be a mother, but someday HE might want to be a mother?

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tristiano

i don't know, i didn't mean i might want to be a mother one day, i meant i might want to be a father one day, but first period poetry never makes as much sense as it should, its too early in the morning.