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Old 05-17-2008, 11:59 AM   #1
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Love Rust

Love Rust

My bubbly blood's like seltzer,
your figure could not be svelter -
rays of sunshine emit from you
like lances from the sun.

Corona of beauty
crossing into my aureole of lust.
Our auras combine to cosmic unity,
my iron, your oxygen, mix to rust.

But the path of love leads to an odd destination -
the yellow brick road goes off to stagnation.
And I will not be tied down,
nor will I drown in happiness

like an ant in sugar,
like a cat in catnip,
like a person in love.
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Old 05-17-2008, 09:03 PM   #2
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Some really interesting lines in this one. I enjoyed the read.
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