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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 05-03-2008, 05:52 AM   #1
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icemoon is on a distinguished road
Walking through the woods

Walking through the woods at night,
i hear children crying
the faint song of a bird dying,
my heart is shipwrecked
on the cold moonlight.

I see a child on the unlit path
summoning me with
a sinister laugh,
its features change
from boy to girl
its left eye blue
its right eye a shimmering pearl.
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Old 05-03-2008, 10:02 AM   #2
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This seem very random to me. A bit like a dream. I don't really know what to make of it..

I like the image of a shipwrecked heart.

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