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Old 04-29-2008, 03:33 AM   #1
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My Dreams, Your Sins
Lay by the water and close your eyes,
Let manic spasms pass you by.
Is it so bad just to pretend with me?
For a demon could act as an angel to see.

Keep your sins out of my sight,
Let me dream just for one night.
Meet me tomorrow and let me know,
As Cupid’s false kiss may soften the blow.
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it has good rhythm although it's a bit trite.

almost like a song.

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