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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 04-13-2008, 09:53 AM   #1
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jjr tolken lover is on a distinguished road
Magniloquent but, Feeble

[FONT='Calibri','sans-serif']Magniloquent but, Feeble[/font]

My mind is broadening,
Expanding with knowledge.
My thoughts are lofty, logical, and more literary than ever before
I know how to do everything.
I know what to do and when to do it.
My mind is vigor and enhanced.
Though my mind is a step ahead I am sloth.
When I am in the near occasion of sin,
A heavy rain of my knowledge, experience and rules pours down on me.
It’s happened uncountable times,
And each time my wall of post it notes fails.
Sin walks in and asks me if it can stay.
I know I’m being watched.
I know what both actions of choice are.
I know the consequences.
I know what I should choose.
I know it’s false.
I know I’ll abominate my decision.
Though my militia of will fails,
And my heart suffers another allowed attack.
[FONT='Calibri','sans-serif']I’ve gained a board on the bridge to salvation but, lost them all again.[/font]
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