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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 04-08-2008, 03:38 PM   #1
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Construct
Silent.
Solid.
Cool to the core,
Radiant outside,
To please them all.

Watches.
Waits.
Commands are given,
Justice reigns,
Be it in thy name.

Dedicated.
Desecrated.
The war rages,
Fires burn,
An innocent facade fades.

Tales.
Travails.
Read in runes,
Nation ruined,
An iron construct cries.



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