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| Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc. |
03-09-2008, 09:39 AM
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03-09-2008, 09:54 AM
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i'm sorry, but i fall into the orthodox group of poetry enthusiasts who deem this sort of thing to be absolute tripe.
this is, in fact, highly offensive to those of us who spend our time honing our craft in order to present a cogent and coherent message.
dear lord- what is the world coming to.
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03-09-2008, 10:00 AM
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should i have mentioned elves?
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03-09-2008, 10:01 AM
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perhaps you should read the thread title before entering.
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03-09-2008, 12:06 PM
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i think its pretty funny, actually. in fact, you seem to be joking about wherever i see your name. i dont know if u write or not, but if u do, post something...i could use the laugh
...and next time, take the red pill, Neo. blue magic's effecting your work, LOL...
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03-09-2008, 01:36 PM
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03-09-2008, 08:05 PM
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A wonderfully visual and perceptive piece of poetry. The linebreaks come at opportune moments throughout and the assonance and consonance is very well manufactured. I would take my hat off to you, but I am afraid it's superglued over my eyes.
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03-10-2008, 12:52 AM
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you do know, i'm going to have to
try and decode this bloody thing now
and the sixth line, on the third stanza
has really thrown me for a loop, thanks
lol
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05-04-2008, 04:33 AM
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bump
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05-04-2008, 04:51 AM
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As much as it was meant to be a joke, its a pretty crap one.
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05-05-2008, 03:48 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Not Edna
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LOOOOOOL
Can't believe you bumped this. I'll bump it too as it just makes me smile.
Nice one
Jack
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06-24-2008, 06:39 AM
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T.W. North
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06-24-2008, 06:39 AM
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Ha, this thing calls me a writer.... lol
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06-24-2008, 06:40 AM
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Jack is profound... lol
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06-24-2008, 06:41 AM
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my internet connection is working really well and this is posting oh so rapidly....
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