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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 02-23-2008, 10:23 AM   #1
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Angry Anti-hood

With my nature,
It's hard to write songs
How can you put shit like that into songs?
Shit will be way to long
A fucking emotional coaster
Way fucked up to control
Way over the top and past its toll
It no street shit either
Hell it just sounds like I inhaled a fucked up load of ether
Hell my dream's to be like Duke, no joke either
No guns, bitches or hoes in this shit
I'll be my own little bitch
Well, there is pot and vodka involved
So kiddies under 12 turn away
want no shame
This is not a fucking game!
It's the fucking antithesis of the hood life baby
Minus the lame
Think those guys may have it hard?
But crying fucking bottles of tears to The Notebook?
How does that feel?
It's the real emotional deal!
Not some "dangerous drug deal"
Ha that shit fucking isn't real!
Go to New York, bitch, it's like buying candy
"Well, you'll be high and dandy!"
The real challenge is trying to get into M.I.T.
Hell, that bitch does not go down as easy as iced tea
All you gangsters fucking have to do is avoid gang bangs
While the real crackers have to avoid messed up bangs!
Who the fuck can tolerate bad hair?
The gang's just have afro and shaved
Hell, it's no two roads that diverge, they got their path paved
Hell, pimps have it way too easy, no matter what they say
Since when has some CEO enjoyed his job at IN-TECH
Shit is gay!
The real life is fucking philosophy and deep thought
not some gat that you shot
In the fucking parking lot!
Grow up bitches
In this white life, its harder to get to the riches
Grow up bitches this is fucking life
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Old 02-23-2008, 01:54 PM   #2
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to be honest i just read all of this and cant remember any of it. ._O very confusing.
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I like the rhyming .
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Old 02-23-2008, 02:12 PM   #4
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Try posting this in Lyrics, I think it's more suited.

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