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Old 02-22-2008, 11:40 AM   #1
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Stained Glass, pretty window… The sunlight scatters beautiful… Blood spread, finger paint… Five brush strokes downwardly flow… Trapped inside souls want out… Thick panes unbreakable… Spectrum of reds shining through… A massacre in the temple….
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Old 02-22-2008, 11:43 AM   #2
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Stained Glass, pretty window… The sunlight scatters beautiful… Blood spread, finger paint… Five brush strokes downwardly flow… Trapped inside souls want out… Thick panes unbreakable… Spectrum of reds shining through… A massacre in the temple….
I fyou want feedback then I suggest that you read and follow the forum guidelines. Posting three or four poems a day is frowned upon as this is a particularly busy forum and poems get quickly knocked down to the second page without a view. It is also recommended that you offer comments to others on the forum, who will then return the favour much of the time.
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