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I'm focusing on the fact that workshop means workshop. If anyone considered his work already perfect then there would be no point in posting here. Even those who post great pieces of work, like Mirror and ms vodka, need encouragement and reassurance. Occasionally they post something that needs to be worked on as well. I admire dannyboy's humility in this area.
In regard to this poem, it is what it is, an experiment. There are comments made that could be used if you want to build this any further. I wouldn't consider this as a great publishable piece but I do think that it's a form that you can develope.
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