Me In Autumn - Page 2 - Writers Forum

JessicaVendetta · 02-04-2008, 11:23 AM

Very lovely work, smooth flow, simple innocations, yet a strong sense of solitude throughout. Very enjoyable read, nothing needs changed

Mermaid on the breakwater · 02-05-2008, 12:43 PM

Any other suggestions? I know, I am a prick for bumping a poem from the very last rung of page 1 but there you go, I have a habit of just not caring

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Thanks to everyone who has left their sentiments, you're all fabulous, darling.

Baron · 02-05-2008, 12:52 PM

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Originally Posted by Mermaid on the breakwater

Any other suggestions? I know, I am a prick for bumping a poem from the very last rung of page 1 but there you go, I have a habit of just not caring

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Thanks to everyone who has left their sentiments, you're all fabulous, darling.

You could have quite legitimately bumped this anyway by just politely responding to the above comment. Just don't let Pete know.

Mermaid on the breakwater · 02-05-2008, 01:28 PM

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Originally Posted by Baron

You could have quite legitimately bumped this anyway by just politely responding to the above comment. Just don't let Pete know.

Pete's a pissed off porker!

I have it · 02-06-2008, 02:18 AM

nice, but one question...how can wind blow beneath rooted feet? Is there space for the wind to blow when something is rooted? I swear I am being serious!!!!!!!!