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Old 01-31-2008, 01:48 PM   #1
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Thievery

The ancient wisdoms
have no merit
In this world,
the thieves inherit
No patience left for
those deserving
Besides the gift
of thoughts unnerving
The right path lies
through subconscious minds
Unfollowed by logic,
the trip made blind
Though blind from the start,
the end is seen
A bundle of thought
no friend can mean
For when you embark,
you capture the heart
something
only a thief can accomplish.
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Old 02-22-2008, 09:46 PM   #2
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it took me forever and a day to find this.
your lucky it didnt suck.
yer all i suck at poems.
lieeees.
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Old 02-22-2008, 09:47 PM   #3
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I disagree ^.~,
but thanks anyway .
I don't write poetry all that often.
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Old 02-22-2008, 09:49 PM   #4
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i can argue all day.
the more i argue the more posts i have.
you dont suck.
ahaha you dont suck, i surely hope not.
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Old 02-22-2008, 09:51 PM   #5
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Well, in the literal sense I suppose not.
Poetically, I am lacking .
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