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Old 01-29-2008, 12:53 PM   #1
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Selected poetry by Ariana Rink and John Williamson:

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Very nice Mirror, I look forward to your pieces. Strong imagery is your expertise.
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Yes, this is a wonderful piece Mirror. Vivid.


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Thanks, Sad. Much appreciated.

Jack, thank you. I'm glad you've enjoyed it. Still unclear about 'blood vs. bloody'? It's simply my knack for placing adjectives after nouns, occasionally.
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The "blood twenty four carat" works for me. "Bloody" would completely alter the image and meaning.
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Thanks for the confirmation, Baron.
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