Autumn

Lives beyond the screen-
who knows
righteous, lapsadaisical
apropos?
As minds excite
to cyber zones
surreality permeates
skulls bones,
with transcendence
a slip away
gripes grasp grotesque
images that pay
and I wonder
if
perhaps
I've 'known'
'the man who
ate his lover'

Baron

An interesting poem. no sugestions. I enjoyed the alliteration and flow in this.

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Mirror

For some reason, this piece grew on me. Never fancied writing about cyberspace, but you smoothly (through great sound devices) progress from the mechanical to something more fleshy at the end.

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Where the barmen have their names etched in salt; earthy and honest like their fathers. -- MisterJack