Loulou

Powerful stuff Mirror. Love that you never use any unessesary words. Every single one matters. And how. Like the tree/root/earth/nature imagery - I think of a small, barely-grown twig being taken from its tree, and dying. Emotive stuff.

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Mirror

Thanks, Pete. Glad it worked for you.
Lou, you definitely picked up on the life tree and us being a mere branch destined to an apocalyptic end. Good to see you in a poetry thread.

Thanks again.

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